tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-272427521323407625.post3666677023080480393..comments2014-03-05T18:28:39.468-08:00Comments on lavari: सस्ती शराब पिता हूँ और कुछ ऐसी ही शायरी करता हूँ |Lavarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02918724139548828185noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-272427521323407625.post-22798520814872551732010-06-27T20:43:39.204-07:002010-06-27T20:43:39.204-07:00aashiq ka janazaa hai.........like in the case of ...aashiq ka janazaa hai.........like in the case of great poets,pain inspires random and rambling prose.Kuch kavitayein sirf dard se sehmat hoti hai,kuch pyaar se,kuch shararat se,but when you are able to combine these as sensitively as you do,lavari ,lavari nahi rahi ne kai judu,koi jadoo jevu bani jai chey.Its like a flowing river,rambling at times,trickling softly at other bends,gushing out in fury at falls and racing to meet the ocean at times.Hope the flow of this river is perennial because just like it helps you pour out your emotions,so also,it makes the reader absorb verse,to quench thirst.Ashleshaahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04386964212116388754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-272427521323407625.post-76748403285778055222010-05-07T23:35:28.893-07:002010-05-07T23:35:28.893-07:00dada have never read so appealing and to heart blo...dada have never read so appealing and to heart blog ever... Great bossS Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13983021563021995486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-272427521323407625.post-62299123513840982032010-05-03T07:42:11.863-07:002010-05-03T07:42:11.863-07:00Kyarek..na kyarek nahi gahni vaar tari irsha thay ...Kyarek..na kyarek nahi gahni vaar tari irsha thay che..solid, bas lakhya kar.Mehul Mangubahenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03998406843648236105noreply@blogger.com